Oy vey…

So, blasting along in the final year of my MFA, getting all the deadlines and such, and WHAM!  Dr. P. wants a rewrite.  Apparently I didn’t understand the essay’s expectations.

I wanted to do this:

But ended up with a reply more like:

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